Kane, your powerpoint provides useful information in regards to depression. However, it is quite boring for a media product for it only has one picture while the rest are words. Next time, try spicing it up with more interesting details such as a link or video. Other than that the content is neat and organized. Good job!
That powerpoint was DEPRESSING SEE WHAT I DID?
Really though it was informative, but it broke the six by six rule so you get a 10/5.
It taught me about depression and other types of depression, how people suffer through these other types of depression, and how it feels to suffer from depression.
There were a couple of spelling mistakes, and I think that the other types of depression should have been elaborated upon.
Stay classy San Diego.
Overall a deceent job on the powerpoint I missed the citations though i was looking forward too them. I learned a lot about what Hamlet is going through right now.
Great Job Kane!
The PowerPoint was very detailed with relevant information for your topic. I learned many new things about depression from your power point. For instance, I never knew that depression affects about 8% people in their lifetime and that a large amount of people were depressed during the early 1600’s
A few errors that you should fix for your next media product are, remember to edit you PowerPoint for grammar and spelling mistakes. In addition, you could also expand on some of your information (e.g. Different types of depression) so the audience can have a better understanding about your topic. Furthermore, next time you should attempt to add some pictures to make your power point a bit more interesting.
Overall, great work!
What an excellent powerpoint!
Although there were minor spelling mistakes, and you didnt abide by the 6x6 rule, the information succeeded the minor mistakes
This was a very factual power point. I learned a lot about depression and know I can understand better what Hamlet is going through. One negative would be that this was a bit boring to read, needs more pictures and excitement. But altogether well done.